Student feedback writer
ProblemWriting personal, useful feedback on 40 assignments is exhausting, so feedback gets generic.
Class 8 paragraph on climate change; rubric: claim, evidence, clarity
What's working: your opening claim is clear — 'Cities are getting hotter every summer.'
Improve: back it with one fact, such as a temperature record from your city.
Next step: find one news source and add a sentence that starts 'According to…'.
Immediate resultSpecific feedback for a piece of work: what's working, one thing to improve and a next step.


